NHS appointment letter

Project to rewrite and redesign an appointment letter sent out by the local NHS trust.

How the new letter looked

redesigned and rewritten NHS appointment letter with clear language and logical structure

And here’s how it used to look.

The original version (shown below) of this letter was handwritten, making it difficult to read, and time-consuming to produce. The text also didn’t make it absolutely clear what actions needed to be taken, risking valuable NHS resources being wasted.

handwritten NHS appointment letter with confusing text

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Comments on | NHS appointment letter

  • Nicola says:

    Did patients help design the letter with you?

    Kind regards
    Nicola

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